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Where we supposed to watch this in classSo we never watched this episode in class so I’m just going to assume that this is supposed to be another blog about anything blog. I’m working on my common place revision and I think its going pretty well. I had a conference with the professor and she had some really good ideas for my paper that I’m trying to implement. My topic is obesity so I’m writing a satire about it but in my first one the tone wasn’t extremist enough so the other day I went to the library for a couple hours and just tried to get mad at fat people. I have a pretty mild personality so this wasn’t that easy to do but after thinking about it for a while I got in the mood and I just started ranting. When I finally stopped I looked back at it and I was a little surprised at what I had written but it wasn’t written very well in terms of grammar. But there were a lot of good parts so I guess I can take my old paper which had a lot of logical arguments and this paper which had a lot of angry extremist ideas and stuff and mash the two papers together to make something that makes sense but also has that extremist satirical feel to it. I though it would be easy to write a satire but its turning out to be a lot harder than I thought it would be. Well, that’s two hundred and fifty words, bye for now!